Yo, cool dude! I really like the second one down for a double page spread and the last one for a contents page. I likt how the picture goes all across one page and I like the structure of the contents page and how its all in boxes.
Lucyann. I like the use of the roller paint font, that works and you can clearly take a photo. My favourite DPS is the first one with least writing, sadly the exam board want to see lots of writing so I'll have to check whether this would be acceptable as understandably you wont have demonstrated an ability to match the written style of music magazines.
You'll need a few more artists to put on your contents as at the minute its a bit Erica Emm heavy.
I really like the contents at the bottom, the only criticism i have is that on the third one from the bottom i think it would be better if the picture didn't overlap the text.
Yo, cool dude! I really like the second one down for a double page spread and the last one for a contents page. I likt how the picture goes all across one page and I like the structure of the contents page and how its all in boxes.
ReplyDeleteAyup cooldude, I like the top two for cover page and double page spread, and I think the contents page is cracking!
ReplyDeleteLucyann. I like the use of the roller paint font, that works and you can clearly take a photo. My favourite DPS is the first one with least writing, sadly the exam board want to see lots of writing so I'll have to check whether this would be acceptable as understandably you wont have demonstrated an ability to match the written style of music magazines.
ReplyDeleteYou'll need a few more artists to put on your contents as at the minute its a bit Erica Emm heavy.
I really like the contents at the bottom, the only criticism i have is that on the third one from the bottom i think it would be better if the picture didn't overlap the text.
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